[GET] Simple Business Formula - Become An Expert Product Launcher And 6-Figure Business Owner In Jus

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  1. BobMarleyFan

    BobMarleyFan Well-Known Member

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    Hey BHTers

    This may be of use to some of you.


    SalesPage:

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    http://www.chollamarketing.com/?page_id=141
    Download:
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    http://mir.cr/5YJISH6N

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    https://www.virustotal.com/en/url/f3dfa580ebb27964d3153deb09524c05f015a756b315f020730d6d32ca46b1dd/analysis/1438157320/
    Njoy and let us know if it's any good.
     
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    I will always have doubts about anyone who leaves this in their sales page boiler plate:
    "Insert Sub Headline that will capture the attention of
    visitors scrolling down the page…"
     
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    racingguy Well-Known Member

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    He,he. That guy is definitely an EXPERT :)
     
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    lol :). I hardly ever read the whole page of a lengthy sales pitch. I would never have any noticed that.
     
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    I've seen this type of mistake in sales pitches, emails, newsletters. All over the place. Even on Amazon. Lazy, stupid people who are way too "busy and important" to have to read about their own products! Talk about dumb f*cks!
     
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    Not only that, but if you actually read it, it's quite awkward sounding English. I'd bet writing the copy was outsourced to someone for whom English is not their first language. It hasn't been proofed either.

    Example:

    "You will learn how to create an unstoppable sales copy that masters the art of persuasion. This section does not have to be scary. I make it easy"

    Bad English. Bad punctuation. Nate Stryker must be so proud of his business.

    What a star!
     
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