Looking for Kindle reviews of my latest short crime story

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    wlasikiewicz Well-Known Member

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    As the title says I'm looking for people to review my new short crime story that i have just published onto kindle.

    I can send anyone that can help me a copy of my ebook via the BHT messages system. It will be in .PDF format.

    Here is the link to it on Amazon or you can search for it yourself (The Bamber Family Murders)
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    http://www.amazon.co.uk/gp/product/B01AT0A71W
    Any help would be fantastic.

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    okay. please send me one. If it is lengthier one, it would take some time for me to review
     
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    Sure. I'll review it.
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    Yep, will be happy to help and promote it just send a copy to review.
     
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    Copies sent out, please don't forget to give it a review.
     
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    hi, ok i'll leave a review for ya :)
     
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    If this is about the Jeremy Bamber case then I still remember it from 1985-86 and would like to read your account of it (and provide a review). One thing I would say up front is that the bloodied dagger on the cover is irrelevant and incorrect as all the victims (his adoptive family) were apparently taken out with a family-owned rifle.
     
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    That they were, good eye. Ill inbox you.
     
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    Hello W Lacky,

    I noticed your novels received 1 review only.

    To increase exposure & hopefully sales I would recommend (if you haven't yet)
    to offer your books 1 or 2 weeks for free to attract new eyes & reviews.

    If you can send them a message like thank you for downloading my novel,
    you could receive some extra reviews.
    I guess it is allowed by Amazon TOS.

    I suppose it is not allowed to ask for a review but you should be able to thanks your readers
    (please check the Terms of Service)

    The covers are quite good expect those ones:
    • Worlds End Murders: Christine Eadie & Helen Scott
    • The Night Stalker: Richard Ramirez
    • How To Make Moonshine (could be improved)
    Another aspect you should work on (or hire someone to do it for you)
    is providing a more exciting plot, make people want to read more.

    One line is not enough to bait your future readers.

    If you struggle too much with the ebook covers, I could help you.

    Hope you will find those remarks useful to grow your business.

    Regards,
    Alan.
     
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    Hi wlasikiewicz
    Are you still looking for reviewers for your book?
     
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